ext_103163 ([identity profile] lucyjin.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] deralte 2005-11-05 09:55 pm (UTC)


*wibblywibblysquee and billions of heart-marks*

I'm loving this fic. <3

“Okay. Widen your eyes and let your lower lip tremble. Good. Now ask me something.”

“Sensei, can you teach me a new jutsu?” Wide grey eyes stared up at him out of a face still chubby from baby fat.

“Ye- wait!” He glared at Kakashi who looked quite pleased with himself. He was creating a monster, wasn’t he?


aksjdhaklhsdagsdkjhasdjk<3<3<3. I DIE. xD

On a slightly more coherent note, I loved Yondy's interaction with the older ninja around him. It all seemed just right, especially Oro's reactions. xp And I like the way you're capturing/portraying Sakumo as well. It's really drawing me in. o.o

*GLOMP*

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