Chapter 3 Silver and Gold

[deralte]

I've given up on trying to get ff.net to work. It says the next chapter of Silver and Gold is up there, but try loading the page. It's like the old days when ff.net used to be out ever other weekend. And, wow, does that make me feel old. Anyway, on the off chance that ff.net works, the link is here. The link to chapter 3 on skyehawke is here. (Oh, and if someone's going to skyehawke to read the story, someone rate it please. It's one of my pet peeves when stories are being read and not rated there... mostly because I find it annoying to only see some of my stories rated... Yes, I'm anal about weird things.)

I have a few things to do then I'll be schlepping on over to ozmaz for what will no doubt turn into a One Piece marathon.

Rug burn on elbows from breakfalls have started bleeding. I shudder to think what my bro's look like since his were worse than mine. On plus side, can almost move my arms today and bruises have reached the yellowing stage. Ja ne!

Comments

[lucyjin.livejournal.com]

*wibblywibblysquee and billions of heart-marks*

I'm loving this fic. <3

“Okay. Widen your eyes and let your lower lip tremble. Good. Now ask me something.”

“Sensei, can you teach me a new jutsu?” Wide grey eyes stared up at him out of a face still chubby from baby fat.

“Ye- wait!” He glared at Kakashi who looked quite pleased with himself. He was creating a monster, wasn’t he?

aksjdhaklhsdagsdkjhasdjk<3<3<3. I DIE. xD

On a slightly more coherent note, I loved Yondy's interaction with the older ninja around him. It all seemed just right, especially Oro's reactions. xp And I like the way you're capturing/portraying Sakumo as well. It's really drawing me in. o.o

*GLOMP*

[deralte.livejournal.com]

*g* I loved writing that scene:D Thanks for the feedback. It's good to know what's working. I still have no idea how Orochimaru wangled himself such a large roll in this fic. I hadn't had any plan to include the snake o_0 And Sakumo wants more screen time too now that I understand him a bit better. Maybe all ninja are secret attention whores?

*is duly glomped* *grin* *hugs*